Wednesday, February 4, 2009

Thoughts continuously keeping me from falling asleep
Each idea floating out from my mind
Surrounding my body,
Suffocating me like a hungry snake
Unable to let go of the stress
My day keeps going on inside my head
Daydreams are the only dreams I'm having
the never-ending theories that pop into my head
Each one leads to another
I have an infinite amount overflowing
They keep me on edge
Will I ever be able to unwind?
I toss and turn just waiting for the moment to come
when I stop thinking and start dreaming
Relaxation seems impossible for me
I am so sick of laying there motionless
Impatient and full

4 comments:

C.S. Perry said...

Good imagery in this one. And the last line is the hook.

Drink more wine. It helps.



VOTE ROOKED.

C.S. Perry said...

Hey. Write one for me. I could use it.

Lake Tahoe Dan said...

great description. I know how it is and sometimes wish I could shut off my thoughts , which at times seem to have a mind of their own. drink more wine!

hch said...

I'm the same way,
I don't think i ever relax.
It's crazy and scares me sometimes, that I don'tk now how to unwind.
Good to know I'm not the only one.