Wednesday, February 4, 2009

Thoughts continuously keeping me from falling asleep
Each idea floating out from my mind
Surrounding my body,
Suffocating me like a hungry snake
Unable to let go of the stress
My day keeps going on inside my head
Daydreams are the only dreams I'm having
the never-ending theories that pop into my head
Each one leads to another
I have an infinite amount overflowing
They keep me on edge
Will I ever be able to unwind?
I toss and turn just waiting for the moment to come
when I stop thinking and start dreaming
Relaxation seems impossible for me
I am so sick of laying there motionless
Impatient and full


C.S. Perry said...

Good imagery in this one. And the last line is the hook.

Drink more wine. It helps.


C.S. Perry said...

Hey. Write one for me. I could use it.

Lake Tahoe Dan said...

great description. I know how it is and sometimes wish I could shut off my thoughts , which at times seem to have a mind of their own. drink more wine!

hch said...

I'm the same way,
I don't think i ever relax.
It's crazy and scares me sometimes, that I don'tk now how to unwind.
Good to know I'm not the only one.